-1 Sonic render is hard to see
-1 Overly blended, way too many effects going over him.
-1 Text, the bottom right and the actual 'Sonic'. I personally don't like the emboss/gloss/outline text.
-1 Random FX, too bright in one spot and more darker in another. Almost like a light source, except the bright is all over one half of the tag.
6/10
Really nice, you've improved a lot.
8/10
-Your light source is just a big white negative space, try to stay away from that.
-Render seems awfully flat, hard to see much depth.
Also I feel that it's an overly bright tag...idk, maybe do some burning or try to bring out the contrast.
The line for your name could be reduced a little. Maybe do a clipping mask with a B&W gradient layer going like this and tweak the opacity/layer setting a bit.
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